1. What is the sacred? What is the religious? How
do you recognize the religious and/or the sacred when it is manifesting in
discourse?
The
Sacred:
experiences that urge reverence or seem worthy of veneration or praise; awe
inspiring encounters with the mysterious or the divine; moments set apart as
extraordinary; a source of evidence for the religious.
The
Religious: sets of beliefs, practices, and values that bind groups of people
together; points of identification in which there is shared acknowledgement of
what is sacred and what is profane; the formalization or codification of
experiences deemed worthy of recording; an effort to theorize the sacred; an
attempt to explain that which cannot be empirically tested.
In thinking through the qualities of the sacred and
the religious as they are manifest in discourse, I keep circling back to three
distinctions: (1) AristotleÕs
divisions (deliberative, forensic,
epideictic), (2) James KinneavyÕs aims of
discourse (referential,
persuasive, literary, and expressive), and (3) the degree of emotional, intellectual, and volitional
processing that has taken place at the
point of composition, utterance, or design. According to the definitions of the
sacred and the religious set forth above, their manifestations in discourse are
likely to emerge in different ways. The sacred, when manifest, is apt to take
the form of epideictic rhetoric, share the qualities of expressive discourse,
and exist in an early state in the rhetorÕs mind,
heart, and will. Religious discourse, on the other hand, is likely to take the
form of deliberative rhetoric, share the qualities of persuasive discourse, and
exist in a later state in the rhetorÕs mind, heart,
and will.
Based on my definition of the sacred, sacred
discourse is an attempt to articulate extraordinary experiences. It is an effort to
communicate the astonishing, the praiseworthy, and the mysterious. Sacred
rhetoric, in other words, endeavors to create meaning out of, and give shape
to, the best of experience. It is an honorific response to an awe-inspiring
moment that has not been formulized. Sacred rhetoric seeks to bring forth that
which is praiseworthy for the purpose of displaying an extraordinary experience
or object of praise. In this way sacred rhetoric is consistent with Lawrence RosenfieldÕs notion of epideictic rhetoric. Sacred rhetoric
shows forth experience not for the purposes of mere display, but to call
attention to the extraordinary moments (internal or external) in human
experience that would otherwise remain unnoticed. In discussing RosenfieldÕs view of epideictic in his introduction to Rhetorics of Display, Larry Prelli
explains that ÒAt its best, epideictic calls for collective acknowledgement of
virtueÕs presence; it Ôacts to unshroudÉnotable deeds
in order to let us gaze at the aura glowing from withinÕÓ (3). Through such
display, the members of the audience Òcalled to gaze upon the reality of
excellence disclosed through the exemplary instances manifested before
themÉundergo an epiphany or otherwise draw inspiration from the epideictic
encounterÓ (Prelli 3). As a result of such occasions, particular virtues,
beliefs, and values are given ÒpresenceÓ (Perelman 35). By bringing such
experiences before the mind of an audience, values and beliefs are fortified,
challenged, and even invented.
In attempting to flesh out the qualities of sacred
discourse in accordance with the definition of the sacred IÕve established
here, KinneavyÕs discussion of expressive discourse is also
useful. Kinneavy explains that Òwhen the language product is dominated by the
clear design of the writer or speaker to discharge his emotions, achieve his
own individuality, or embody his personal or group aspirations in the
discourseÉthe discourse tends to be expressiveÓ(136). Many attempts to convey
the sacred, it seems to me, would fit this description, because sacred
discourse, as it is defined here, attempts to communicate an ÒactualÓ
experience—whether in the rhetorÕs
consciousness or in the material realm. Such experiences would need to be
expressed in a mode that permits the rhetor to use
figures of speech to make the sacred moment present, for as C.S. Lewis notes in
ÒThe Language of Religion,Ó ÒThe very essence of our life as conscious beings,
all day and every day, consists of something which cannot be communicated
except by hints, similes, metaphorsÓ (186). The mode most fitted for this work
is expressive discourse, or what Lewis calls Poetic Language. In discussing the
ways in which human beings share our experiences, sacred or otherwise (Lewis
argues there is no distinctly religious language), Lewis writes,
Now
it seems to me a mistake to think that our experience in general can be
communicated by precise and literal language and that there is a special class
of experiences (say, emotions) which cannot. The truth seems to me the
opposite: there is a special region of experiences which can be communicated
without Poetic language, namely, its Ôcommon measurable features,Õ but most
experiences cannot. To be incommunicable by Scientific
language is, so far as I can judge, the normal state of experience. All of our
sensuous experience is in this condition. (183)
From
LewisÕ view, then, expressive discourse (or Poetic language in his terms) are forms best equipped to articulate the sacred.
Related to the concept of expressive discourse is the degree of emotional,
intellectual, and volitional processing that has taken place at the point of
composition, utterance, or design. By this, I mean (and IÕm still trying to
work this out), the extent to which the rhetor has
attempted to codify or systematize an experience. When the sacred is manifest
in discourse it is unlikely to be presented formulaically, or with ÒcompleteÓ
understanding. By virtue of the fact that the experience communicated is
extraordinary, awe inspiring, and mysterious, there is little room for an
attitude of total confidence in the exactness of oneÕs words. AugustineÕs remarks in
Book I, Chapter VI of On Christian
Doctrine regarding the complex of nature of conveying the sacred through
language, speaks to this point:
Have we spoken or announced anything worthy of God?
Rather I feel that I have done nothing but wish to speak: if I have spoken, I
have not said what I wish to say. Whence do I know this, except because God is
ineffable? If I said what were ineffable, it would not be said. And for this
reason God should not be said to be ineffable, for when this is said something
is said. And a contradiction in terms is created, since if that is ineffable which
cannot be spoken, then that is not ineffable which can be called ineffable. The
contradiction is to be passed over in silence rather than resolved verbally.
For God, although nothing worthy may be spoken of Him, has accepted the tribute
of the human voice and wished us to take joy in praising Him with our words. In
this way he is called Deus. Although
he is not recognized in the noise of those two syllables, all those who know
the Latin language, when this sound reaches their ears, are moved to think of a
certain most excellent immortal nature. (11)
By thinking about sacred discourse in terms of RosenfieldÕs and PerelmanÕs notions of epideictic rhetoric,
KinneavyÕs and LewisÕ understandings of expressive
discourse/Poetic Language, and AugustineÕs comments above, we can imagine forms
such as prophecy, worship, prayer, testimony, parables, mystical accounts,
speaking in tongues, personal writing, nature writing, travel writing, and some
kinds of preaching possessing the qualities described here.
While I certainly do not see the sacred and the
religious as mutually exclusive, to my mind they are in some respects
different. As I noted above, I view the religious as an effort to theorize the
sacred. For this reason, religious discourse is likely to take the form of deliberative rhetoric,
share the qualities of persuasive discourse, and exist in a later state in the rhetorÕs mind, heart, and will. Unlike sacred discourse,
religious discourse does not simply attempt to set forth what is excellent or
best in experience; it goes a step further by attempting to systematize that experience so
that it can be taught, re-enacted, re-visited, embodied, and passed on to other
human beings. Religious discourse is a result of the codification of
experiences deemed worth recording and teaching. Religious discourse attempts
to deliberately urge specific kinds of responses (e.g., obedience, confession,
faith, silence). It shares sets of beliefs, practices, and values that bind
particular groups of people together in an effort to forge identification with
whomever is present. It intends to persuade hearers of its goodness, worth, and
truth. It aims for commitment. Thus, in these ways, I see religious discourse
as sharing character of deliberative rhetoric and the aims of persuasive
discourse.
In terms of the degree of emotional, intellectual, and
volitional processing that has taken place at the point of its composition,
utterance, or design, religious discourse, it seems, exists in a later state in
the rhetorÕs mind, heart, and will, because its
commonplaces are more readily available, its terms are more frequently
articulated, and its ideas are more often thought to be understood than in the
case of sacred rhetoric. Though the commonplaces, terms, and ideas may not stem
from the rhetorÕs experiences, he or she will feel
they are familiar because of the frequency with which they are encountered.
Because a relatively consistent body of ideas is communicated over and over
again, he or she is likely to be more confident in his or her understanding of
them. When there are sacred texts to study, ancient rituals to re-enact, and
longstanding theological discussions to contemplate, there are more
opportunities to process the experiences made available by religious discourse.
This range of activity is apt to create a greater sense of confidence in the rhetor who is communicating the religious. In the case of
the religious, the rhetor has symbols to return to
again and again. Where the sacred is concerned, however, there are often no such
opportunities. Religious discourse could certainly take a number of the forms
mentioned above; however, the kinds of discourse that are more often going to
fit neatly under this heading, include theological arguments, church creeds,
apologetic texts, conversion narratives, and most sermons.
I look forward to meeting all of you on Friday. My
examples of sacred discourse and religious discourse are attached, and below
are the explanations of why I choose the excerpts I did.
2. Identify discourse related to the sacred or
religious that you find particularly rich for rhetorical analysis. Send a text
or some "shard" representing that discourse. Please include or attach
(if graphic, sound, or video-based) an explanation of why you selected the
particular discourse. If your file is too large to attach, please send a weblink to it.
My dissertation project, ÒArchiving
the Sacred: An Exploration of Austin PhelpsÕs Nineteenth-Century Rhetoric and
Pedagogy,Ó examines the
rhetorical theory, writing pedagogy, and pulpit oratory of Austin Phelps, an
accomplished nineteenth-century preacher and professor of sacred rhetoric at
Andover Theological Seminary. One of the central aims of this archival project
is to add another dimension to our fieldÕs understanding of the terms Òsacred
rhetoricÓ and Òreligious rhetoricÓ via rhetorical analyses of PhelpsÕs
published sermons and preaching manuals. An examination of PhelpsÕs notion of
sacred rhetoric is significant not only because it offers a more complete
understanding of the his rhetorical theory, but also because it has the
potential to provide clues that could help us define more clearly what it is we
are talking about when we use terms such as sacred rhetoric or religious
discourse. A few questions guiding my thinking in this realm of exploration
are: (1) What might we infer about nineteenth-century
sacred rhetoric from PhelpsÕs practice as a pulpit orator and instruction on
the subject of preaching? (2) What does
rhetorical education that seeks to prepare students to articulate their
religious commitments look like? (3) In what ways might PhelpsÕs efforts to
prepare his students to share their religious commitments inform our
pedagogies? (4) What might PhelpsÕs theory of sacred rhetoric add to our
understanding of invention? (5) What constitutes invention in the realm of
sacred rhetoric? IÕve included an excerpt from a collection of PhelpsÕs sermons
on prayer, The Still Hour, to analyze
together, because I am interested to see how the class responds to this example
of sacred discourse. I am in the beginning stages of this chapter of my
dissertation, and it will be really helpful to think through this analysis with
other experienced rhetoricians and compositionists.
For
my examples of religious discourse, I have included excerpts from a Christian
studentÕs persuasive research paper and personal narrative that I received in
an Honors First-Year Writing course this spring. I am using these papers, along
with his analysis essay, in an article that I am writing for an edited collection
on the integration of faith and English studies. In part of this article, I am exploring a range of possible
responses to this Christian student's argument paper and faith-based narrative,
and I am hoping the class might help me think through responses that might
allow this student to more effectively draw upon his Òreligious faith to
inspire and nurture effective rhetorical practiceÓ (Vander lei 3). My
questions, thus, are: What is this student doing well? Where do his essays fall
apart? Why? In providing suggestions for revision, what guidance would you
offer this student? What might writing instruction that responsibly aims to prepare students
to articulate their religious commitments look like? What are your thoughts on teaching people to write well
toward aims that you may be opposed to?
Works Cited
Augustine. On Christian Doctrine Trans. D. W. Robertson. New
York: Library of Liberal Arts, 1958.
Kinneavy, James. ÒThe Basic Aims of Discourse.Ó Cross-Talk
in Comp Theory: A Reader. 2nd ed. Ed. Victor Villanueva. Urbana, IL: NCTE, 2003. 129-40.
Perelman, Chaim. The Realm of Rhetoric. Trans. William Kluback. Notre Dame, IN: U
of
Notre Dame, 1982.
Prelli, Lawrence J.
ÒRhetorics of Display: An Introduction.Ó Rhetorics of Display.
Ed. Lawrence J.
Prelli.
Columbia, SC: U of South Carolina P, 2006. 1-38.
Rosenfield, Lawrence W. ÒThe Practical Celebration of Epideictic.Ó Rhetoric in
Transition: Studies in the Nature and Uses of Rhetoric. Ed. Eugene E. White. University Park and London: Penn State U P, 1980. 131-55.
Vander
lei and Bonnie Lenore Kyburz. Ed. Negotiating Religious Faith in the
Composition Classroom. Portsmouth: Boyton/Cook/Heinemann, 2005.